In the class of Language we wrote a letter to an editor of river town as if we were a resident. In the letter we wrote our opinion about insecurity.
-Start your letter, Dear Editor
-Follow the plan on page 93
-Use "useful expressions:"
- Introducty comments: one
- agreeing: three
- explaining your views: two
- claryfing: two
-150 words
Dear editor,
I am a resident river town and I read your article in river town times. The incidents of burglary and car theft in particular have been rising, because of this we need to prevent crimes, In addition the responsibility is on the police and us
I am a resident river town and I read your article in river town times. The incidents of burglary and car theft in particular have been rising, because of this we need to prevent crimes, In addition the responsibility is on the police and us
I fully agree with the view of the government, that we also have to do things to prevent crime, such as have alarms installed, avoid taking out the garage at night, etc... However I am also in agreement with my neighbor's point of view, that the police have to do more things! Such as install cameras in the streets or respond to crime quickly.
In other words, the police and the citizens have to protect our homes and possesions, that is to say that we want the same things, for this reasons we are a team, as a conclusion we have to work together.
Sincerely, Victoria
Sincerely, Victoria
